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I can feel it building up
It's about to come out
So twisted inside
About to break down

Ill from the mental strain
Too much to take on at once
Bringing  to myself a constant pain
I think I've had enough

Unclean, and soil smothered
I'm dirty, my body covered
So shamed, the way I use me
You don't love, and I refuse to love...
Me

Downstairs
I find regularity
Inside, I force feed negativity
I WON'T, stop until control breaks loose
Face me, the mirror of a coiled truth

Smalls tears
The ones that seep, they drain the sorrow
Keep fighting, but I don't feel the need for tomorrow
Inject
The fluids of a small town fuck
Keep moving
I think I've had enough

Unclean, and soil smothered
I'm dirty, my body covered
So shamed, the way I use me
You don't love, and I refuse to love...
Me
©2007-2009 ~raivin
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Face me, the mirror of a coiled truth
I absulutly love this line (yes i cannot spell)
This is so amazingly sad but i love it all at once. you are an amazing writer

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Stand in the rain. Stand your ground. Stand up when its all crashing down.'
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Thank you...
What's your name?

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I, as you can guess from talking to me, understand these feelings all too well... :hug:

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~Amy~
OMG RAIN'S WET!!!!

"It doesn't work anymore! I've been shooting them off one after the other and it just doesn't work anymore! I'm all out of fluid!" ~Brandon when shooting off fire balls (fluid=lighter fluid)

<needs another funny quote here>
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indeed

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:) yeah...

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~Amy~
OMG RAIN'S WET!!!!

"It doesn't work anymore! I've been shooting them off one after the other and it just doesn't work anymore! I'm all out of fluid!" ~Brandon when shooting off fire balls (fluid=lighter fluid)

<needs another funny quote here>
:iconlovely-disaster:
As in, my first name? (just making sure we are on the same page)

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Stand in the rain. Stand your ground. Stand up when its all crashing down.'
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Yes, your first name. Mine is Ashley.

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Mine is Bridget

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Stand in the rain. Stand your ground. Stand up when its all crashing down.'
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Ello Bridget!

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